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Professor Pedantic 教授的考究學問
【學術專欄】
TPS的編輯教授在此歡迎關於學術文章的所有詢問,當然,其實他並沒有足夠的時間給你。他擁有終身教職的教授身份,也是著名的學術巨作作者。即便如此,他仍大方地接受你們的詢問。將關於學術方面的詢問寫在下方,你將獲得教授的親自指導,陶冶對學術的探索與啟發。
The professor awaits your query on academic writing, though in all honesty, he doesn’t have a lot of time for you. He is a tenured full professor and working on yet another magnificent academic tome. Even so, he has graciously consented to entertain your question. Submit it and prepare to be edified.

QUESTION: How often should I restate my premise as I work my way through my paper?
寫論文時,請問我應該多久重申一次論文的立論前提?

Restating a premise is not necessary, per se. That is, while a thesis introduced at the front of a paper should be revisited in the paper’s conclusion, the central proposition of a paper generally doesn’t have to appear again and again verbatim throughout a paper. Unless the structure of a paper lends itself to such repeated use of a particular declaratory sentence, subtle allusions are sufficient. They will keep the point of a paper in front of a reader. They will serve as guideposts as a reader moves though the paper, reminders of where reader and writer are headed together.
立論前提本身無須一再重申,雖然假設應該在論文開頭提及,並在結論時重新敘述,但論文中心前提不必在整篇文章中一字不漏地反覆陳述。除非論文結構本身適合重複使用某一句陳述句,否則略微暗示就夠了。這樣就能夠將論點呈現在讀者眼前,像路標一樣在整篇文章中引導讀者,提醒讀者何時應與作者取得共識。

Some repetition of the central purpose of a paper is a good idea, because it gives a paper coherence, pulling it together like a drawstring, capturing and holding a reader’s interest. Without such a common thread running through it, a paper is apt to wander into interesting but largely irrelevant tangents. Such detours do not contribute significantly to understanding. Quite the contrary: The further a writer strays from a core subject, the more difficulty the writer will have smoothly transitioning back. Abrupt jogs in exposition leave readers nonplussed.
重複幾次論文的中心論點是好事,能讓文章連貫,像束繩一樣將文章組織在一起,抓住讀者的興趣。論文若沒有這條共通的主旨,就很容易走偏方向,文章段落也許有趣但彼此缺乏關連。這樣曲折迂迴的寫法對理解沒有什麼幫助,作者偏離核心主題愈遠,愈難流暢地轉回正題。要是突然重提中心論點,會讓讀者覺得摸不著頭緒。

So at key points, allude to the premise using synonyms, or describe it anew in the course of giving anecdotal or clinical examples. If a premise has a key word, drop it in (in proper context) throughout the body of the paper. This subliminal referencing to the premise ensures that a reader remains focused throughout his reading without explicitly being asked to do so. In the end, the logical development of a subject and systematic revelation of new information should reinforce a premise at every step without additional aids, but it is wise to use every tool.
所以,在關鍵的地方可以用同義詞暗示前提,或是在描述軼事或臨床範例時,用另一種方式重複前提。若前提有個關鍵字,可適時於通篇論文中提點。以不引人注意的方式重申前提,能讓讀者在閱讀整篇文章時保持專注,但又不必明確要求讀者照做。最後,若主題發展合理、提出新訊息時有條不紊,每一步都在強化論文的前提,無須額外輔助;不過,善用所有輔助方式也是聰明的做法。


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